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questions not covered below, use the Associated
Press (AP) Stylebook. SDSU has adopted this reference as the
university's official style manual for publications targeting media
and other external and internal audiences. All SDSU communications
professionals should keep an updated copy of the AP Stylebook
on their desks. Faculty or staff writing for scholarly publications,
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General Guidelines and
Punctuation
Where do you place
the apostrophe in a possessive? What's
the correct way to use commas in a series? Should
I really worry about sexist language? See below
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- abbreviations
(See also acronyms.)
When in doubt, spell it out. The current trend is not to
use periods in abbreviations: GPA, EOP, UN, NATO, CIA. Here
are some exceptions: B.A., Ph.D., U.S., D.C., L.A., M.D.,
Mrs., etc., St., Co., pp. Note that you should insert a
letter space between the initials in a proper name: E.
B. White. In general, avoid "alphabet soup."
Do not use abbreviations or acronyms that the reader would
not quickly recognize.
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- accent
marks
Use with foreign words such as "café" or
"cliché."
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- acronyms
Always spell out the full name or phrase the first time,
followed by the acronym in parenthesis; then use the acronym
alone in subsequent references: "The Aztec Parents
Association (APA) met in January. The APA is expected to
meet again in June."
Exceptions are extremely well-known acronyms such as NAACP,
NASA, FBI, etc. Use GPA, not G.P.A.
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- a.m.,
p.m. (See also time.)
Lowercase and use periods.
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- ampersand
(&)
Avoid unless part of an official name.
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- apostrophes
(See also plurals and possessives.)
- To
show possession, add an apostrophe and letter "s"
to singular words, even if they end in s or z:
- To
plurals ending in s, add an apostrophe only:
- Don't
confuse possessive adjectives, which do not take apostrophes,
with contractions, which do:
- The
cat lost its toy.
- It's
time to go.
- Omit
the apostrophe from plurals:
- 1990s
- POWs
- M.A.s
and Ph.D.s
- Words
as words (do not use an apostrophe):
- His
argument had too many "ifs" and "maybes"
to sound convincing.
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- brackets
Use brackets to add explanations or corrections to quoted
material: "He [John Smith] received his diploma yesterday,"
said the chancellor. Use brackets as parentheses within
parentheses: "You can learn about the process of writing
a play by reading a collection of interviews with playwright
Tony Kushner (Robert Vorlicky, ed. Tony Kushner in Conversation
[Ann Arbor, Mich.: The University of Michigan Press, 1998])."
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- bullets
Bulleted items that
conclude an introductory sentence should be lowercase and
punctuated with a comma or semicolon at the end of each
item except for the last. Use the word "and" before
the last bulleted item, and end the sentence with a period:
When each item of a list completes the introductory sentence,
- list
items should begin with lowercase letters;
- all
but the last item should end with a comma or semicolon;
- the
second-to-last item ends with "and"
- the
last item ends with a period.
Bulleted
items that are not part of an introductory sentence may
be upper- or lowercase and may end with either periods
or no punctuation. However, format should be consistent
within any given context:
San
Diego area residents enjoy a variety of seasonal recreational
activities:
- water
sports
- camping
and hiking
- skiing
- picnicking
Usually,
there is a space between the bullet and the first word
of each item.
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- capitalization
For pointers, see the Purdue University Online Writing Lab
section on capitalization.
The following examples serve as general guides to capitalization:
University or university (See SDSU-specific Guidelines:
Capitalization Notes.)
city
of San Diego
county of Los Angeles
San
Diego County
San Diego Area
Sacramento Valley
San Francisco Bay Area
San Joaquin Valley
San
Diego City Council; the city council
federal
U.S. government
Bush
administration
state of California
state Department of Health
U.S. Department of State
New York State
The state is experiencing a surplus.
Earth (planet)
Central
Coast
Central Valley
southern California
south Georgia
the South
the South Bronx
Southern Hemisphere
North Africa
Pacific Northwest
western Asia
Southeast Asia
central Africa
Eastern philosophy
eastern U.S.
We walked east.
East Coast
African American, Asian American, Mexican American, Native
American,
Euro-American, Hispanic, Chicano, Latino, black, white
Note also the adjectival forms:African American student,
Euro-American student, Italian American neighborhood
biblical
(lower case)
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- centuries
Except at the beginning of a sentence, use figures in ordinals
(20th century). Hyphenate when used as a compound adjective
(19th-century novels). No apostrophe in such designations
as 1900s. Centuries: lowercase, spelling out centuries under
10: ninth century but 10th century.
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- colon
(See also semicolon.)
Use a colon to introduce a list or series: "The president
mentioned three possible candidates for the award: Johnson,
Phillips, and Vandever."
Do not use a colon
between a verb and its complement or object: "The three
candidates are: Johnson, Phillips and Vandever."
Use a colon to introduce
word groups that begin with for example, for instance, that
is, and namely: "American history courses
often discuss some of our nation's most famous documents:
for example, the Constitution and the Declaration of Independence."
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- comma
(See also semicolon.)
For dates and times, use the following guidelines:
April
1, 1950, was. . . .
April 1950 was. . . .
The program is scheduled for 8:30 p.m., Tuesday, December
12, 2000.
Commas
in digits signifying thousands (1,500 vs. when not to use
them, i.e., 1500 degrees)
A word,
phrase or clause that is in apposition to a noun and that
is parenthetical is set off by commas:
Washington, D.C., is. . . .
My husband, Joe, studies. . . .
If, however, the word, phrase or clause is restrictive
(identifies or restricts the meaning of the noun), commas
should not be used:
My sister
Ellen works. . . .(the speaker has more than one sister)
Milton's work Paradise Lost was. . . .
The book that I received for Christmas . . . (use "that,"
not "which," in restrictive clauses).
In a series
or list: use commas to separate elements in a series, but
do not place a comma before the conjunction in a simple
series:
Use a
comma before a conjunction connecting two independent clauses:
Course 20 is required for the major, and students should
complete it by the end of their junior year.
As a general
rule, do not use a comma before a conjunction connecting
a compound predicate:
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- dash
There are two kinds of dash-of different length and for
different purposes-in addition to the hyphen. The em dash
(-) is the true dash, used for parenthetical remarks or
abrupt changes of thought, epigraphs, and datelines. Because
there was no dash character on a typewriter keyboard, dashes
were traditionally indicated by two hyphens (--). Computers
offer typists the ability to produce a proper dash. Newspapers
traditionally used a space on each side of a dash, and AP
still requires such spaces. However, letter spacing is the
responsibility of the designer (of the typeface and of the
publication), and it is not necessary to routinely add such
spaces. Columns do not use spaces around dashes. The em
dash is named for the amount of letter space, that of a
capital M, that it occupied in a line of type set in the
particular typeface. The en dash (-) is shorter than the
em dash and longer than a hyphen. It is used for continuing
or inclusive numbers or words (range constructions: pages
7-10; Jan. 5-9; E-P; Monday-Friday), but not when the word
"from" is actually used (1968-72 or from 1968
to 1972, never from 1968-72). An en dash is also used
in place of a hyphen in a compound adjective when one of
the elements is an open compound (post-Civil War; Peabody
Award-winning program, Athens-Clarke County government).
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- dates
Use commas to set off the year when using full dates:
She
graduated on May 18, 2001, in San Diego.
April 1, 1950, was. . . .
April 1950 was. . . .
Planning began in September 1985.
The program is scheduled for 8:30 p.m., Tuesday, December
12, 2000.
Do not use 1st, 2nd, etc., with dates: July 21, April
2, etc. (not July 21st, April 2nd, etc.)
Specify
the year only if not the current calendar year:
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- decades
No apostrophe in decades (1980s). Use an apostrophe
(not open single quotation mark) to replace the first two
digits if they are omitted ('80s). "The air temperature
was in the 90s throughout the '90s when she was in her 90s."
(See also entries for "academic
years," "centuries,"
"dates," "months"
and "years".)
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- exclamation
point
Use the mark to express a high degree of surprise, incredulity
or other strong emotion. Avoid overuse.
Placement with quotes: Place the mark inside quotation marks
when it is part of the quoted material: " That's great!"
he shouted.
Place the mark outside the quotation marks when it is not
part of
the quoted material: I hated reading Melville's "Bartleby
the Scrivener"!
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- figures
Use numerals for numbers 10 or greater; spell out zero up
to and including nine:
one,
eight, nine
10, 21, 105, 2,436
EXCEPTIONS:
use figures for degrees (temperature or longitudinal).
Spell out any number at the beginning of a sentence: Twenty
years ago today, Sgt. Pepper...
Use a comma with numerals of 1,000 and above (except dates):
5,000, 42,000.
Exceptions to the rules:
- Use
numerals when referring to academic credit: The student
earned 2.5 hours of credit.
- Use
numerals when referring to a page number: The passage
begins on page 5.
- Numbers
may be mixed in the same sentence or paragraph: SDSU
had two administrators and 11 faculty giving reports.
Eleven journalists, three legislators, and 146 community
members voiced their opinions.
- Use
the same rules for ordinal numbers:
second,
ninth, 10th, 25th, 169th
UCSC's five tennis players ranked first, third, 10th,
l6th, and 23rd in the men's singles competition.
- In
scientific text physical quantities, such as distances,
lengths, or areas, should be expressed in figures; in
ordinary text such quantities should be treated according
to the rules above.
- Ages
always use figures: The boy is 5 years old; the 9-year-old
girl lives here. (See ages.)
- Use
figures for course numbers, scores, percentages, compound
numbers, decimal fractions,and very large numbers:
Biology
3
5 percent (See percent.)
4 feet 7 inches
1.34
$5 billion
3 million years ago
- Dates
(See dates.)
- Page
numbers always use figures: The footnote was on page
7.
- Plus
mark: avoid it (say 30-plus, not 30+).
- Fractions:
Spell out amounts less than 1, using hyphens between
the words: two-thirds, seven-sixteenths, etc.
- Time
of day (See time.)
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- fund-raising,
fund raising, fund-raiser
("Many agree that fund raising is difficult. They planned
a fund-raising campaign and hired a new fund-raiser.")
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- geographic
regions
Lowercase north, south, northeast, northern, etc., when
they indicate compass direction. Capitalize these words
when they refer to a region:
Many industries
are relocating to the South.
Other
examples:
- Most
publishing companies are based on the East Coast.
He is a Midwesterner.
The Southwest generally is hot and dry all year.
- With
names of nations: Lowercase unless they are a part of
a proper name or are used to designate a politically divided
nation:
southern
France
the western United States
But: Northern Ireland, Northwest
Territories
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- hyphens
Hyphenate any modifying words combined with WELL when preceding
a noun (well-built engine, well-grounded in mathematics).
Do not hyphenate words with the prefix NON, PRE, SEMI, ANTI,
or CO, except those containing a proper noun (e.g., nonprofit,
premedical, non-German). Exception: hyphenate to avoid duplicated
vowels or triple consonants (pre-enroll, bell-like). Suspensive
Hyphenation: the loan was offered for a 10- to 15-year period;
both full- and part-time jobs were offered.
Words formed with prefixes are not usually hyphenated:
prewar,
nonprofit
Exceptions:
when the second element is capitalized, when the second
element is a figure, or to distinguish homonyms:
pre-Civil
War
pre-1960
re-create, un-ionized
Many
compounds that are spelled open as nouns are hyphenated
as adjectives:
field-study
program
high-level job
long-range planning
lower-division course
ninth-century manuscript
off-campus housing
Compounds that begin with adverbs ending in -ly are spelled
open:
highly
complex species
poorly organized paper
Use this form for compound hyphenation:
two-
to three-semester program
Here
are our preferred forms of some commonly used compounds
and other terms:
- audiovisual
(or audio-visual)
- bilingual
- campuswide
- coauthor
- co-op,
cooperative
- copy
edit
- cross-cultural
- database
- decision
making
- e-mail
- fax
- field
house
- field
study
- fieldwork
- freelance
- full
time, full-time
He works full time. Hyphenate only when used as a
compound modifier: She got a full-time job.
- fundraising,
fundraiser
- groundbreaking
- interdisciplinary
- midcentury
- mid-June
- multicultural
- nonmajor,
nonresident
- off-campus
(adj.), off campus (adv.)
Hyphenate when used as an adjective: The university
is looking at off-campus housing as an option. Write
two words, without hyphenation when used as an adverb:
The student moved off campus. Guidelines are the same
for on-campus and on campus.
- online,
offline
- part
time, part-time
She works part time. Hyphenate only when used as a
compound modifier: He has a part-time job.
- postdoctorate
- postgraduate
- pre-enrollment
- prelaw,
premedicine
- re-enter,
re-entry
- semiconductor
- socioeconomic
- statewide
- systemwide
- Third
World
- underrepresented
- under
way (adverb)
- universitywide
- Unix
- up-to-date
- work-study
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- i.e./e.g.
i.e. means that is. (Latin: "id est.")
e.g. means for example. (Latin: "exempli gratia.")
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- impact
Do not use as a verb. Use affect or influence. "Failing
biology affected
his choice of a major," not "Failing biology
impacted his choice of a major."
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- inclusive
language
(See also SDSU
Senate Policy File III-A-2: Statement on Diversity.)
-
ageism: Common stereotypes portray the old as
foolish, frail, poor, isolated, rigid, reactionary,
senile, or kind and grandparently. Avoid such stereotypes.
- appearance:
Avoid negative stereotypes of the obese and overweight.
Characteristics such as lazy, stupid, sad or lacking
willpower are sometimes attributed on the basis of body
shape and size alone. Alternatively, the association
in the media of thinness with desirable characteristics
such as happiness, acceptance and self-confidence is
a model that should not be followed. Irrelevant descriptions
of women's appearance and attire should be edited out.
- disabilities:
The term "disabled" is preferable to "handicapped."
The phrase "people with disabilities" is preferable
to "the disabled." Write "He has muscular
dystrophy" rather than "He is afflicted with"
or "is a victim of." Write "She uses
a wheelchair" or "walks with crutches"
rather than "is wheelchair-bound" or "confined
to a wheelchair." Handicapped is, however, still
used for references to parking and building access.
- race,
ethnicity, nationality: Use white (not Caucasian).
Lowercase blacks and whites but capitalize identifications
with geographic words: American Indian or Native American,
Asian (not Oriental), African Americans, Asian American,
Chicano, Euro-American, Filipino, German American, Hispanic,
Indians, Latino, Latina, Mexican American, Native Alaskan
(never Eskimo), Native American, Pacific Islander. Say
"international student" (not "alien"
or "foreign"). Use "underrepresented"
or "underserved" students; do
not use the term "minority."
Note
also the adjectival forms:
African
American student
Euro-American student
Italian American neighborhood
- sex
and gender, sexual orientation
Copy intended to apply to both sexes should be written
so that no gender bias is suggested. Avoid man, mankind,
and words ending in -man. Substitute: humanity, people,
worker, firefighter, etc. Avoid singular pronouns (he,
she, his, hers) when referring to both sexes. Substitute
they or you:
Students pay their fees . . .
You should pay your fees . . .
(not
"a student should pay his fees . . . )
If
absolutely necessary, both pronouns can be used with
or (do not use he/she or his/her): A student should
pay his or her fees. . .
Lady/woman:
Use woman when referring to a female 18 years or older.
Sexual
orientation: "Gay" is acceptable as a popular
synonym for both males and females, although it is generally
associated with males, while "lesbian" is
the more common term for homosexual females. Avoid references
to gay, homosexual or alternative "lifestyle."
Use "sexual orientation," not "sexual
preference."
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- italics
Italicize names of books; journals; magazines and similar
periodicals; plays; long poems and collections of poetry;
names of drawings, paintings, photographs, statues and other
works of visual art; specific names of boats, ships, submarines,
aircraft, airplanes, spacecraft; scientific names of plants
and animals; isolated words or phrases in a foreign language
(translations are enclosed in parenthesis) and words or
phrases that are emphasized in textual material.
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- months
Names of months are spelled out in text when they are not
accompanied by a specific date. They are spelled out when
accompanied by a year. Examples:
The
fall semester begins in August.
In December 2000 Arkansas had a terrible ice storm.
The following
months are abbreviated in text when accompanied by a date:
Jan., Feb., Aug., Sept., Oct., Nov. and Dec. Examples:
The
next club meeting is Monday, Nov. 12, 2001.
Graduation will be held on May 18, 2002.
(See also entries for "academic
years," "centuries,"
"dates," "decades"
and "years".)
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OK'd, OK'ing, OKs
But not O.K. or okay.
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- percent
One word, spell out (avoid % except in tables and graphics).For
amounts less than one percent, use a zero: "His GPA
rose only 0.7 percent." Repeat the word "percent"
with each additional figure in a sentence: "The professor
noted that 7 percent to 12 percent of his students had failed
the test."
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- plurals
(See also apostrophes and possessives.)
- Words
ending in "ch," "s," "sh,"
"ss," "x" and "z," add
"es" to form the plural: batches, lenses,
marshes, masses, boxes, fizzes.
- Words
ending in "is," change the "is"
to "es": analyses, theses, oases.
- Words
ending in "y" (if preceded by a consonant
or "qu"), change the "y" to "i"
and add "es": armies, ladies, sololoquies.
Otherwise, add "s": keys, plays. (For proper
names ending in "y," simply add "s":
Kennedys, Murphys.)
- Words
ending in "o" (if preceded by a consonant),
add "es": heroes, echoes. (Pianos is an exception.)
- Words
ending in "f," change the "f" to
"v" and add "es": hooves, loaves.
(Roofs is an exception.)
Omit the
apostrophe from plurals:
1990s
POWs
M.A.s and Ph.D.s
Latin
plurals:
Singular:
criterion, medium, symposium
Plural: criteria, media, symposia
Use
apostrophe with plural of single letters (She earned four
A's and two B's), but not with multiple letter combinations
(I know my ABCs) or with numerals.
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- plus
Don't use as a substitute for "also," "in
addition" or "moreover."
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- plus
mark (+)
Avoid it. Say 30-plus, not 30+.
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- possessives
(See also apostrophes.)
Add an apostrophe and "s" to singular nouns not
ending in "s": boy's friend, Karl Marx's book,
Professor Smith's class.
Add an
apostrophe and "s" to singular common nouns ending
in "s" unless the next word begins with "s":
the hostess's dress, the hostess' swimming pool.
Use only
an apostrophe with singular proper names ending in "s":
Dickens' book, Jesus' teachings.
Use only
an apostrophe with words that don't end in "s"
but that end in an "s" sound and are followed
by a word beginning with "s": for appearance'
sake, for conscience' sake. When such words are followed
by a word not beginning with "s," use an apostrophe
and "s."
Use a
possessive form after the last word if ownership is joint
(John and Georgia's chess game) and after both words if
the objects are individually owned (Phil's and Ken's garages).
Use the possessive in cases like the following where the
focus is on the activity, not the person: John's constantly
playing Nintendo drives me bonkers. Dad doesn't approve
of my betting on horses.
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- quotations
and block quotations
In running text, quoted words, phrases and sentences are
enclosed in double quotation marks: Holmes said, "My
well of English seems to be permanently defiled." "He
says" and all its variations are set off by commas
from the quoted text: "My well of English," says
Holmes, "seems to be permanently defiled."
Quoted matter may stand by itself (as in the examples above)
or be worked into your own sentence: Holmes says that his
"well of English seems to be permanently defiled."
Use single quotation marks for quotations within quotations:
Watson says, "Sherlock Holmes once said, 'My well of
English seems to be permanently defiled.'"
The period and comma always go within the quotation marks.
The dash, semicolon, question mark and exclamation point
go inside when they apply to the quoted matter but outside
when they apply to the entire sentence.
When a quotation
is longer than one paragraph, use quotation marks at the
beginning of each paragraph but only at the end of the last
paragraph.
Block quotations
Material set off from the rest of the text as a block quotation
is indented, left and right, and not enclosed in quotation
marks. Quoted matter included within a block quotation should
be enclosed in double quotation marks.
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titles
(See titles.)
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French, "répondez s'il vous plaît"
(please reply).
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- seasons
Lowercase the names of the seasons unless they are part
of a formal name or designate an issue of a periodical:
Winter Olympic Games, the Fall 2000 issue of Poetry.
He graduated in the spring semester.
She arrived in time for fall 2000 registration. (See also
General Academic Usage: semester.)
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- semicolon
(See also colon.)
Use a semicolon to connect two *independent clauses
if they are closely connected in meaning:
"The girls played piano; the boys danced."
"It was a great book; I read it in 2 hours."
Use a semicolon between two *independent clauses when they
are joined by a connecting word such as "however"
or "therefore":
"The movie was boring; nevertheless, I stayed awake."
"I'll get you the money; however, you're going to have
to pay me back."
Use a semicolon in a serial list when separate elements
of the list contain commas:
She had two sons, Mark and Hank; three daughters, Jessica,
Mary and Sara; and four
grandchildren, Hanna, Laura, Kristina and Anika.
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Use sic (which means "intentionally so written")
in brackets to indicate that an error in the quoted material
is being reproduced exactly: "He writes that he is
a strong admirer of President Brush [sic]."
Italicize sic; do not place a period after the letter
"c."
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- states
Capitalize the names of states; lowercase the word state:
the state of New York. Exception: New York State. Names
of states, territories and possessions of the United States
should be spelled in full running text. For addresses on
envelopes, use the two-letter state postal code (see table
below) with zip code. There is no comma between the city
name and postal code and zip code. Example:
Office of Admissions
San Diego State University
5500 Campanile Drive
San Diego CA 92182-7455
Standard
Abbreviations: Use standard abbreviations for state
names. Alaska, Hawaii, Idaho, Iowa, Maine, Ohio, Texas
and Utah are never abbreviated.
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ABBREVIATION
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Alabama
Alaska
Arizona
Arkansas
California
Colorado
Connecticut
Delaware
District of Columbia
Florida
Georgia
Hawaii
Idaho
Illinois
Indiana
Iowa
Kansas
Kentucky
Louisiana
Maine
Maryland
Massachusetts
Michigan
Minnesota
Mississippi
Missouri
Montana
Nebraska
Nevada
New Hampshire
New Jersey
New Mexico
New York
North Carolina
North Dakota
Ohio
Oklahoma
Oregon
Pennsylvania
Rhode Island
South Carolina
South Dakota
Tennessee
Texas
Utah
Vermont
Virginia
Washington
West Virginia
Wisconsin
Wyoming
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Ala.
Alaska
Ariz.
Ark.
Calif.
Colo.
Conn.
Del.
D.C.
Fla.
Ga.
Hawaii
Idaho
Ill.
Ind.
Iowa
Kan.
Ky.
La.
Maine
Md.
Mass.
Mich.
Minn.
Miss.
Mo.
Mont.
Neb.
Nev.
N.H.
N.J.
N.M.
N.Y.
N.C.
N.D.
Ohio
Okla.
Ore.
Pa.
R.I.
S.C.
S.D.
Tenn.
Texas
Utah
Vt.
Va.
Wash.
W.Va.
Wis.
Wyo.
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AL
AK
AZ
AR
CA
CO
CT
DE
DC
FL
GA
HI
ID
IL
IN
IA
KS
KY
LA
ME
MD
MA
MI
MN
MS
MO
MT
NE
NV
NH
NJ
NM
NY
NC
ND
OH
OK
OR
PA
RI
SC
SD
TN
TX
UT
VT
VA
WA
WV
WI
WY
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- telephone
numbers
Use figures. Use
hyphens, not periods:
212-555-1500, 555-1500 (not 555.1500). Do not use parentheses
for the area code. For toll-free numbers, long-distance
calls and in cases where it is required locally, use the
prefix numeral 1: 1-800-555-1000. If extension numbers are
given: ext. 2, ext. 364, ext. 4071. Use a comma to separate
the main number from the extension. For international numbers,
use the country code (in parentheses) and city or regional
code (where required): (44) 20-7353-1515.
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- temperature
Do not
use plus signs, minus signs, or the degree symbol when
expressing temperatures in nontechnical copy. Use scale
designations (Fahrenheit, Celsius, Kelvin) when necessary
to avoid confusion. Follow whichever example is appropriate
to your context:
The
temperature fell to minus 20.
The temperature reached 7 below zero.
The temperature was 20 degrees Celsius.
The temperature was 20 degrees C.
It was 98 degrees Fahrenheit.
It was 98 degrees F.
Fahrenheit,
Celsius, and their abbreviations are capitalized; centigrade,
sometimes used in place of Celsius, is not. When temperature
and gravity are expressed in technical text and lists, use
figures; use a degree sign; the name of the thermometer
is usually abbreviated:
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- time
(See also centuries,
decades, years.)
Use figures except for noon and midnight.
Never write 12 noon or 12 midnight as this is redundant.
Use a colon only when separating hours
from minutes: 3 p.m., 7:30 a.m. Never write 3:00
p.m. Always include a.m. or p.m. with the time (lowercase
and
use periods). Avoid using "o'clock"
when referring to time.
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- titles
(See also Titles,
Academic in "General Academic Usage.")
- titles
of books, plays, movies, songs, etc. (capitalization,
italics, and quotation marks in titles of works)
Articles,
prepositions, and coordinate conjunctions should be lowercase
in titles unless they are the first or last words; lowercase
the to in infinitives:
The Last of the Mohicans
A Rage to Live
In addition
to published books, pamphlets, newspapers, and periodicals,
the titles of long poems, plays, major musical works,
paintings, records, compact discs, audio- and videocassettes,
television programs, and movies are capitalized and set
in italics:
a
story in the Los Angeles Times
an article in Foreign Affairs
Harold Pinter's The Servant
the film Heavenly Creatures
the television program Six Feet Under
Don Giovanni by Mozart
El Greco's View of Toledo
Tom Jones by Fielding
Exception:
musical titles identifying musical form and/or key are
set accordingly:
Fantasy
in C Minor
Hungarian Rhapsody no. 12
William Tell Overture
Emperor Concerto
Titles
of articles, songs, short poems, and parts of books are
capitalized and enclosed in quotation marks:
"Silent
Night"
"The Raven"
Professor Thackeray's article is titled "Which
Way Is Up?"
Commas
and periods are set inside of quotation marks; question
marks and semicolons, outside of quotation marks (unless
they are part of the matter quoted):
His
thesis, "Man and His World," was. . . .
Do you like the song "Frere Jacques"?
- titles,
personal
Jr., III, 3rd, IV (no comma: Harry Jones Jr. or Harry
Jones III.)
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- troublesome
terms
a/an:
Use "a" before consonant
sounds and "an" before vowel sounds:
The
Civil War was a historical event.
Poland is now a NATO member.
The job requires someone with an MBA.
Phil Jones was nominated for an honorary degree.
about/around:
Use "about" when you mean approximately;
"around" refers to location.
affect/effect:
"Affect" is almost always a verb that means
"to influence or put on": "His decision
will affect many people." "Effect" is almost
always a noun that means "result": "The
effect of his decision will be felt for years."
a
lot: No such word as "alot."
all right: not "alright."
allude/elude: If you are making an indirect reference
to something, you "allude" to it. To "elude"
means to escape or avoid detection.
and/or:
Try to avoid.
alternately/alternatively:
"Alternately" means one after the
other, in time or space. "Alternatively" means
one instead of the other.
barbecue: Not barbeque or Bar-B-Q.
beside/besides:
Beside means "next to" or "at the side
of." Besides means "in addition to."
bi/semi:
Bi means "two," and semi means "half."
bimonthly:
every two months
semimonthly: twice a month
This distinction is more difficult when referring to
years:
semiannual:
twice a year
biennial: something that happens every two years
can/may: "Can" denotes ability, but "may"
denotes possibility and permission.
compose/comprise:
Something is "composed" of something else (meaning
"made up"), but one thing "comprises"
another (includes).
"The
committee was composed of two teachers, one politician,
and three students."
"His speech comprised five major themes."
continual/continuous:
"Continual" means repeated or intermittent; "continuous"
means unbroken.
differ
from/differ with: Politicians "differ from"
(are unlike) each other, but they may not "differ with"
(disagree) each other.
disinterested/uninterested:
A "disinterested" (impartial) observer may be
"uninterested" (lack interest) in the situation.
each/either/neither:
When used as subjects, these three pronouns always take
singular verbs. When they are used as adjectives, the nouns
they modify always take a singular verb.
farther/further:
"Farther" expresses physical distance. ("She
can hike farther than her two sisters.") "Further"
refers to degree, time or quantity. ("The board will
discuss the proposal further at another time.")
Fewer/less
(See less/fewer.)
hopefully:
This word means "with hope" and describes how
someone feels: "Hopefully, he opened the mailbox looking
for the check." The following usage is incorrect: "Hopefully,
the check will arrive."
irregardless:
Do not use this word. Instead, use "regardless," which means "without
regard for" or "unmindful of."
in/into:
These prepositions are not interchangeable. "In"
denotes location or position, and "into" indicates
motion.
in
order to: Wordy. You can usually omit "in order."
(He went to the store in order to buy food for dinner.)
input:
Jargon except in reference to computers. Use "information"
or "opinion" instead.
interface:
Use in the context of computers; in a human context, use
"communicate" or "talk."
lay/lie:
"Lay" is a transitive verb and requires a direct
object. "Lie" is an intransitive verb and never
takes a direct object. "Before lying down (no direct
object), she laid the book on the table." (Book is
the direct object.)
Don't confuse lie and lay
in the past tense. The past tense of "lie" is
"lay" (lie, lay, lain, lying); the past tense
of "lay" is "laid" (lay, laid, laid,
laying).
less/fewer:
When you refer to number of individual items, use "fewer."
When you refer to quantity, amount or bulk, use "less":
"At DataCorp, fewer than 10 employees make less than
$30,000 a year."
more
than/over: These words are not interchangeable. Do not
use "over" unless you are referring to a spatial
relationship. For figures and amounts, use "more than":
"She estimated that more than 100 people attended the
workshop."
nonprofit/not-for-profit:
These are interchangeable terms.
people/persons:
If you are referring to an individual, you are referring
to a "person." If you are referring to more than
one, you are referring to "people," not persons.
plus:
Use only in adding units. Otherwise, use "in addition,"
"also" or "and."
proved/proven:
"Proved" is the past participle of the verb prove.
"Proven" is an adjective.
Cynthia
has proved that she deserves the promotion.
The Ford Mustang is a proven success.
please:
Don't overuse.
preventive/preventative:
"Preventive" is preferable to "preventative."
(The extra syllable is unnecessary.)
reason
why: This usage is redundant. Use "reason"
alone or omit entirely:
"The
reason you did not get the job is you are not qualified."
"You did not get the job because you are not qualified."
set/sit:
The verb "set" requires an object: "Please
set your books on the desk."
"Sit" never takes an object: "Please sit
down so class may begin."
since/because:
These words are not synonymous. "Since" is best
used when it denotes a period of time, and "because"
gives a reason or cause.
than/then:
"Than" is used as a conjunction of comparison;
"then" is an adverb denoting time.
toward: Not "towards."
utilize:
"Use" or "employ" are preferable. ("He
used his contacts to find a job.")
who,
which, that: "That" is used to restrict meaning,
and "which" is used to elaborate on it. "Who"
can be used for both when it refers to people or things
endowed by the writer with human qualities.
"She
has finished the homework that is due tomorrow."
"The homework, which is a history report, is due
tomorrow."
"Professor Jenkins, who assigned the homework, has
taught history for 25 years."
who's/whose:
If you want the contraction, meaning "who is,"
use "who's": "Who's going to bring
cookies tomorrow?" If you want to denote possession,
use the possessive pronoun "whose": "Whose
office are we meeting at tomorrow?"
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- United
States or U.S.
Spell out when used as a noun: "Who will be the
next president of the United States?" Use U.S. (no
space) only as an adjective: "She converted her U.S.
dollars to British sterling."
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- upside
down (adv.) upside-down (adj.) The gymnast turned
upside down. The text is printed upside-down.
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- versus:
"Against" or "in contrast with."
Should be spelled out in general text but may be abbreviated
to "vs." in common expressions like "guns
vs. butter." Use "v." only in legal cases
(Milton v. Thompson).
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- workforce,
work-study, workers' compensation (not workmen's compensation),
workplace
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